May 15, 2022
I like version 1.
But if I were an editor I wouldn’t reject version 2
Bravas for both - great loving wise message
Written by Jenine Bsharah Baines
J…Jen…Jeni…Jenine... Proper names are poetry in the raw. (W.H. Auden) Poet, singer, seeker, hippie grandmother gleefully revealing herself