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a lipogram-tanka

Prompted by Springtime

using only words with springtime’s letters

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Photo by Jenine Bsharah Baines — my spring garden

I see sprigs preening.
Trees seep singing, ringing me.
Pen tempted — mime, mine
inner Pines tiered in pre-Time.
Springs sent — seer’s tips, pet gig.

©Jenine Bsharah Baines 2021

And I thought ’ twittles were tough! Carolyn, here’s a challenge for you — a lipogram!

All lipograms avoid certain letters. But this tanka-lipogram, prompted by , asked me to use “only the letters in the word springtime” — which was REALLY a sweaty workout for my old lady brain.

Thank you, , for the home for my garden photo and this tanka in Flicker and Flight. And thank you, dearest readers, for spending springtime-garden time with me.

jenine

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Jenine Bsharah Baines
Jenine Bsharah Baines

Written by Jenine Bsharah Baines

J…Jen…Jeni…Jenine... Proper names are poetry in the raw. (W.H. Auden) Poet, singer, seeker, hippie grandmother gleefully revealing herself

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