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This is why my word, if I had to choose one, is surrender. Easier selected as a 'word' than lived.

Which is why I loved these words in your poem:

The page kept trying to turn back again

The page finally turned but at big cost

Yes lessons were learned energy spent

The turmoil decided to just go inside.

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Jenine Bsharah Baines
Jenine Bsharah Baines

Written by Jenine Bsharah Baines

J…Jen…Jeni…Jenine... Proper names are poetry in the raw. (W.H. Auden) Poet, singer, seeker, hippie grandmother gleefully revealing herself

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